一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析） 1．书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks. _______________________________________ All the best! Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. All the best! Betty 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which
is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。 要点包括: 1. 变化是什么? 2. 变化是如何发生的? 3. 变化后有什么感受?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending. When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。 【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示：1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯； 2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
4．书面表达
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。
注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。 A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________ 【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages. If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school. 【解析】 【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。 【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。 【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。
5． 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下： 1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。 注意：
1、词数80—100； 2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours, Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours, Tony
【解析】 【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。 【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。 【点睛】
文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。
6．（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:
1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己. 3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮. 4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条. 5.你对运动的观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字 7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数. 8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条） What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in
sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。
7． 中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。
提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提示问题： ● What did you do during the activity of \"Telling Chinese idioms story\"? ● What did you learn from the activity? ● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week. In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many
students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity. 【解析】 【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。 句型：被动句型。
8．书面表达
中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。 Britain Time July 1 - July 14 visit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫） Activities visit the British Museum （大 英博物馆） watch football matches … Attention Cost changeable weather 20,000 yuan Australia Time
Attention Cost Activities August 15 -August 24 visit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸） have fun with kangaroos and koalas … winter 16,000 yuan 要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由；
2. 结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项； 3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范； 5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting. However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England. I hope I will have a good time there! 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
9．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意： 1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；
2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电 讨论结果 25人表示同意 理由 1.这样很方便；2.能节约上学途中的时间。 35人不同意 1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。
【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to
school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and
it could take
them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for
the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morning
the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly. 【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。
写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。 考点：提纲类作文。
10．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。 写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。 2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。 3.读自己喜欢的书。
4.远离危险的地方。 写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。
My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. 【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。 考点：考查提纲作文。
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