My Last Weekend
1702班 郭含红
I had a busy but interesting weekend. On Saturday morning, I visited a fire station. I watched the firefighters work. I learned a lot. What an interesting job! In the afternoon, I wet fishing with my sister. We really had a great time. On Saturday night, I watched TV in my bedroom. I saw a funny talk show. On Sunday morning, I drew a picture of my mom. My mom was so happy. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents in the countryside. I helped my grandma clean the rooms. After that, I fed the chickens with my grandpa. At night, I studied for the English test. I was a little tired but I had so much fun.
我的上周末
我度过了一个忙碌但有趣的周末。在周六早上，我参观了一个消防站。我观看了消防员们工作。我学到了很多。多么有趣的一份工作啊！在下午，我和我的妹妹一起去钓鱼了。我们玩得很开心。在周六晚上， 我在我的卧室看电视了。 I看了一个好玩的脱口秀。在周日早晨，我给我的妈妈画了一幅画。我的妈妈非常高兴。在下，我拜访了乡下的外祖父母。我帮助我的外祖母打扫了房间。在那之后，我和我的外祖父一起喂了鸡。在晚上，我为英语考试而学习了。我有点累但是我玩的很开心。
教师评语：在介绍完自己的每项周末活动时，要做更多的延伸介绍，并加上自己的感受。如：“参观消防站”活动处，可加上：The guide taught me how to call the fire station and what to de when there is a fire. I learned a lot.（导游教我们当遇到火灾时，如何给消防站打电话和做什么。我受益匪浅。）
指导教师：樊颖晗